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Saturday, September 25, 2010

Dedicated to all the professors of MITWEC

The following composition had been arranged for on September 5, 2005, i.e. on the occasion of Teachers' Day.The cultural programme was to commence at 1:30 p.m. I had decided to be a spectator at that time......But, at 1:23 p.m., I was told to come up with something...and this poetry was an outcome of that 7-minute instant thinking. There I went on to compose something; and added 99th poetry to my collection. Here it goes:

(For ready reference, let me inform u that the name of my college was 'MIT women Engg. College', better known as MITWEC).
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ऊंचाई
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चला था एक अजनबी राह पकड़कर,
अपनी सारी यादें समेटकर,
चला था ढूँढने वह एक ठिकाना,
जिससे मिल जाए जीने का बहाना !

जैसे बढे उसके कदम आगे,
मन ने संजोये बीते हुए एक-एक पल के धागे-
हुआ उसे एहसास-
एक कशिश-सी थी,
जो खीचे जा रही थी उसे किसी से पास!

आगे था चित्र कुछ धुंधला-सा,
साँसों से निकला जैसे धुंआ-सा,
कुछ चीज़ें साफ़-साफ़ नजर आ रही थी,
कुछ चीज़ें आखों से ओज़ल हो रही थी |

बस ! थोड़ी देर और-
फिर खुला यह राज,
उठा इस धुंए पर से पर्दा,
जो पीछे छूट गया था- सामने आ खड़ा हुआ |

उस अजनबी के समक्ष,
आ गया एक चेहरा,
बंधा हुआ था उसके सिर पे सेहरा-
बोल पड़ा वह- "पहचाना मुजहे?
                         मैं हूँ- तुम्हारा अपना 'MITWEC'
                         आज दिन है विशेष,
                         याद हैं..........?
                         सन २००२ की तीज-
                         बोये थे तुमने बीज-
                         जो आज बन गएं हैं वृक्ष,
                         जिनमें बस गया हैं MITWEC का हर वह तत्त्व सूक्ष्म,
                         दे दो इनको आशीर्वाद,
                         क़ि वे इतनी ऊंचाई पर पहुँच जाएँ,
                         क़ि-
                         दुनिया उन में समां जाएँ" !

                        

7 comments:

  1. good one! Your professors MITWEC must have felt proud...............

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  2. Very nice ...
    Keep up the good work ...
    I'm sure your mentors are proud of you ...

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  3. Dear Minu....

    Wonderful imagination. You must take part in some mushayra or kavi-sammelan. I'm sure you will really fall the wicket of many shayars....

    Keep it up dear...

    JIGAR

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  4. very nicely composed poem...though in a short period of time.....navin shikshan sansthet pravesh kartanyapurviche manatil bhaav..tya shikshan sansthechi ubharni karnaryanchi durdrushti he sagle atishay chitramay paddhatine lihile aahes...great job done...

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  5. Hi Meenal,
    Its just awsum!!!
    It wouls definately make any person nostalgic about his alma matter, U are a sweet heart, Keep it up and shine like star sweety

    Kavita

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  6. Superb one, as always...

    Keep writing... God bless you...

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  7. This poem shows your true creative roots ! To create a poem in such short time (Shighra Kavita) requires a mind which does not require to set words. It is the emotions which set the words such that something meaningful comes out by itself. That is the difference between a normal and creative person. A normal person tries to write something good. For a creative person, whatever he/she writes is good.

    Waiting for many more such creations...

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